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回过头去看（10）， -- 卜鹰 - (106 Byte) 2006-4-12 周三, 15:05 (517 reads) |
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作者：250 在 海归茶馆 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
by the way in case you are confused: i am the one asked for feedback and then i argue with you on your feedback
here is why
for me, i am pulling feedbacks from everyone as a reader: like it or not like and why. based on that i can decide if, what and how to adjust, again if i do adjust. i know i cannot suit everyone on every part
where we may go off path could be: when you out of good will try to share with me on the writing skill ABCs...i have been there N years ago, i do not really believe you and i look at this eye to eye
i followed a master for 4 years in shanghai, got the critiques from the most famous literature critic of the times, in person......so if you could spare me on the ABCs, we can save ourself some long discussions, unless you want to go into that
hope this makes sense. again i sincerely do appreciate all your feedback! just do not take me as someone just thought of writing yesterday.
作者：250 在 海归茶馆 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
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 [原创][连载]赌(11) -- 250 - (1041 Byte) 2006-4-12 周三, 08:16 (2227 reads) - 越写越好了！ -- wingerle - (19 Byte) 2006-4-12 周三, 19:56 (382 reads)
- thanks -- 250 - (91 Byte) 2006-4-12 周三, 23:27 (335 reads)
- 回过头去看（10）， -- 卜鹰 - (106 Byte) 2006-4-12 周三, 15:05 (517 reads)
- good point, thanks -- 250 - (928 Byte) 2006-4-12 周三, 19:35 (437 reads)
- 开始好看起来了 -- 夭夭 - (9 Byte) 2006-4-12 周三, 10:45 (396 reads)
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