[其它]请同学们帮忙critique 一哈,“最寒冷的冬天是旧金山的夏季”的英文简介:
Select messages from
# through # 帮助
[/[Print]\]

海归论坛 -> 海归茶馆

#1: [其它]请同学们帮忙critique 一哈,“最寒冷的冬天是旧金山的夏季”的英文简介: (3187 reads) 作者: 吴越来自: 吴越之间 文章时间: 2006-8-21 周一, 05:12
    —
作者:吴越海归茶馆 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com

偶给“旧金山”写了个英文简介(要求几百字),大家帮着瞅瞅,有什么不好的地方,替偶改一哈,要是这里反应还不错,偶就照这个版本了。先谢谢了。

“San Francisco Summer” depicts the life of three young girls who came to the United States in 1997 for their American dreams: pains and gains along the journey, tears and happiness in a different culture, attempts and failures in romance, and ever-lasting belief in true love. Originally distributed on the Web, this love story has touched the hearts of millions of people, and is widely acclaimed as one of the most brilliant Internet novels.

Working in the silicon valley herself, the author paints a vivid portrayal of the dramatic ups and downs of the high technology industry between 1997 and 2004. The beautiful scenery of San Francisco, the most romantic city on the west coast, also makes this novel more intriguing to read.


主席大人,今天突然想起来N久之前您布置过这个作业,吓得险些都尿裤子了。立刻写好(老实说也不知您现在需不需要了),先请同学们critique 一哈,有意见的话,偶修改好之后连同书的图片给您一同寄去。抱歉了。

作者:吴越海归茶馆 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com



海归论坛 -> 海归茶馆


output generated using printer-friendly topic mod. 所有的时间均为 北京时间

1页,共2

Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group